Thursday, June 29, 2006

In The Distance Comments

Rating: 4.0

In the distance

A familiar whistle blows
Calling me home
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Jack Dylan
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Catlin Crawford 17 July 2006

So much depth and emotion... I can almost see myself in this poem...

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Christopher Cofield 02 July 2006

This piece is 'amazing' and I echo that for 'Now'! Thank you for the very kind words on 'Soliloquy', they really got to me! ! ! Peace, Christopher

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Grace Hays 30 June 2006

A very captivating piece. I have been down that road myself. Good job. Always & 4ever, Grace

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Will Barber 30 June 2006

The repetitive use of 'in the distance' is haunting - and leads the reader through many universal experiences through your particular experience. This is a very accomplished, resonant work. You obviously have a wide experience of, and wide sympathy with, the universe of feeling - and are grounded in time and space. A very lovely and skillful poem.

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