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In The Depths Of My Mind... Comments

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In the depths of my mind, a clock ticks on,
a metronome of thought, a rhythm so strong.
Its gears and springs, a delicate dance,
a symphony of synapses, a cosmic prance.
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Sheeya Hacks
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M.J. Lemon 18 March 2024

Time, it is such a fatastic gift. This is a fantastic verse, Sheeya.

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2) reflects what Bhagawat Gita exhorts "Uddharet Aatman Aatmanam…"

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Beautiful poem. "mind clock's chime …..urges me to seize the day, to live and love" an ode to the power of mind, the greatest boon to man, that no other creature has got..

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Gordon Walter 15 March 2024

INTERNAL CLOCK IS MORE ACCURATE THAN THE CLOCK WE USE.

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