Thursday, December 17, 2015

In The Depths Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the depths of darkness
In the depths of darkness,
We'll be travelling, a pit of problems
And a pool of sorrow.
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Aishwarya J.Menon
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Chinedu Dike 26 January 2016

An insightful depiction of life at its deplorable low ebb, the need to keep one's spirit high, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A good motivational piece of poetry bristling with knowledge. Faith keeps those that keep the faith - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing Aishwarya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ashutosh Tripathy 21 December 2015

Beautifully written.. Your words had the power to take the reader along to the depths.. And the optimistic thought that there is always a way out.. It gave a sensation that this is all dream and once you wake up it will all be over.. Bravo

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 17 December 2015

Beautiful poetic words, outwitting the depths of darkness.10+

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