Friday, April 17, 2009

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Of sort it animates the scene,
Like the flapping wings of a bee,
Like the twinkling crown of a queen,
Like the crimped ridges of the sea,
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Irene Clark-hogg 10 October 2009

Though your delivery of the English language is a little stilted at times, this is a pleasant poem with some nice rhymes. I can feel your emotions running through it. Well done. Irene

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