Saturday, August 23, 2008

In The Deepest Corner Of My Heart Comments

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In The Deepest Corner Of My Heart

Somewhere beyond the mountains and the seas,
Beyond everything we could touch or see,
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Max Soon
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Osagie Isiramen 21 May 2009

The rhyme scheme-beautiful and picturesque.Good work.Thanks for your comment on my poem.

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Bharat B. Trivedi 25 August 2008

A fine poem, freely flowing a clear brook. Very picturesque. Good Read! BHARAT

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Max Soon 24 August 2008

ohyeah. thanks for pointing it out. i edited it already. thanks! =)

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Tia Maria 23 August 2008

Absolutely perfectly told - what a wonderful world to escape to :) 10 Glazing at the stars? s/be gazing?

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