In the deep of night
With no sound to mar the stillness
I lay awake with thoughts running in my head
Thoughts of a wandering mind
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I cite you now, dear Nudershada, As my thoughts fly away On wings of dreams into the deep of night, they leave a most beautiful poem here to stay sincerest, most charming and sheer bright...............I have enjoyed your most touching poem, dear Nudershada A 10 Full Score for the enchanting poem. God´s Blessings.
A saint has this kind of mind! The poems you write may be out of emotions recollected in tranquility.
Well done. 'Silence offer me company' should be 'Silence offers me company' The last line can be revised to On dreamy wings into the deep night But, as I said, you have a good command of the language, and you have a fine poetic sensibility. Well done.
Good rendition of words. An insightful poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Nudershada.
wandering mind, thoughts in the head. the depths of the night.... a great poem.. thank you dear poetess. dev
thoughts of the night...... stillness, silence as company...... verynice poem dear poet.. thank you very much. tony
Another beautiful poem dear poetess. I love your poetry