Saturday, April 28, 2007

In The Days Of The Past Comments

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In the days of the past
There were roses sweet
With loves colors cast
In the hue reddish treat
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Peter S. Quinn
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Leinad Yancm 15 April 2008

very nice, though i believe it gives the impression it wishes to be read fast, and therefore does not give the reader time to take it in. i prefer my poems to be slower, to hit a reader, take him away into a world i created.

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