good theme...not so good structural movement...Needs improvement...Needs to flow better...The current strycture changes in tone & fluxion from a stanzaic perspective...Still enjoyed the trip...Keep that pen pumping ~FjR~
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good theme...not so good structural movement...Needs improvement...Needs to flow better...The current strycture changes in tone & fluxion from a stanzaic perspective...Still enjoyed the trip...Keep that pen pumping ~FjR~