Thursday, January 7, 2010

In The Darkest Of Shadows Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the darkest of shadows, you will know who i am,
Only you will never know what i am.
A monster, as most people would say,
as they whine and beg for me to come out and play.
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Katellyne Baker
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Amy Marie 10 February 2010

The first two lines are truly a great start to your intriguing poem ;)

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Neat and nice, fearful and funny. Thanks for sharing.

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sky dreams 08 January 2010

this is such a haunting poem.. beautifully written with so much depth... you definetely don't write like most 15 year olds, you clearly have a mature mind.... keep writing

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Katellyne Baker

Katellyne Baker

Oxnard, Calirfornia
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