Tuesday, May 25, 2010

In The Dark, I Learned To See Comments

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I’m restless, and the night is quite dark.
For solace, I've come down to the sea,
feeling the gloom of my lost hopes,
like the roaring waves deep inside me.
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Amrit Rathi
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Emma Adamyan 08 June 2010

what a soft wisdom rules here. what a bright brain has created this poem. BRAVO

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Gita Ashok 06 June 2010

Light we take for granted, effortless and free, We focus not as we have many things to see, Some great truths that night dawned on me. And what a paradox! In the dark, I learnt to see. This is so very true! Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Lady Grace 03 June 2010

i go with noel horlanda's words....full of meaning and comes from the heart...this is very very nice...

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Noel Horlanda 25 May 2010

This is great, although wordy but the lines were well composed with true meaning. All the verses keep flowing from the author's heart.10+

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