Wednesday, July 5, 2006

In The Dark Alleyway Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt her smile like the rays of the sun
approaching me I almost felt she would run
calling my name with a pleasuring glee
excitingly glorious she came to me
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Charles M Moore
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Esther Leclerc 13 July 2006

Charlie, you are the master of the reminiscence (real or inspired) , evoking memories of times goneby in all our minds. This is emotionally rich and satisfying, every word!

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Linda Ori 09 July 2006

Some friendships never end. You pick up where you left off like no time has passed. It's easy, and comfortable. Why is it that some people stay with you forever and others just fade away? Strong story telling here, Charlie. Lovely... Linda

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Patricia Gale 06 July 2006

Lovely reminder of the first love and of times past.Thank you for the reminder of the days of youth. Patricia

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Francesca Johnson 06 July 2006

First love.......it somehow never dies. A beautiful poem, Charlie, it touched me deeply. Love, Fran xx

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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