In The Dark Comments

brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy!

A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it.

True! Let us honestly attempt to redeem.

In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you

Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave

Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too.

very well said a nice poetry to read

Wonderful words Dave. I am sure we all have a big understanding of exactly where you are coming from. how will it be in another 20 years? thank You

We did indeed Dave - and well done from me on reaching the no 1 slot.

nature is to be protected not destroyed by man. but they are doing a pretty good job of it good read

my people Iranian guys during the history they always had blamed others rather to blame themselves for their mistakes and lags.we have to blame ourselves first then blame others with a definite vision. your poem sir is so great :)

Straight to the point and so beautifully expressed! Congratulations Dave on reaching the top.

We destroy nature and don't care about consequences. Message conveyed beautifully. Also congratulations on reaching the top.

Very true words Dave. A good poem.

Congratulations, Dave...You have reached the top...

its time for men to wake up and change the world if they ever will. good write87541

Darkness exist when you prevents the entry of light. But light is there, out side, waiting for your turn. Is up to us let it come in or not.

Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message.

So true....we are responsible for what we are reaping.

We have no one to blame but ourselves truth there, Dave.