Monday, August 19, 2013

In The Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lights are gone
we are in the dark
the world will not see
when the sun goes down
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Dave Alan Walker
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Alookh (matin) 14 September 2013

brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy!

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Alla Simone 31 August 2013

A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it.

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Subbaraman N V 24 August 2013

True! Let us honestly attempt to redeem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 August 2013

In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too.

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Vishal Sharma 22 August 2013

very well said a nice poetry to read

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Lyn Paul 22 August 2013

Wonderful words Dave. I am sure we all have a big understanding of exactly where you are coming from. how will it be in another 20 years? thank You

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Valerie Dohren 22 August 2013

We did indeed Dave - and well done from me on reaching the no 1 slot.

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2013

nature is to be protected not destroyed by man. but they are doing a pretty good job of it good read

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Alireza Asgari 21 August 2013

my people Iranian guys during the history they always had blamed others rather to blame themselves for their mistakes and lags.we have to blame ourselves first then blame others with a definite vision. your poem sir is so great :)

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2013

Straight to the point and so beautifully expressed! Congratulations Dave on reaching the top.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 August 2013

We destroy nature and don't care about consequences. Message conveyed beautifully. Also congratulations on reaching the top.

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David Wood 21 August 2013

Very true words Dave. A good poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 August 2013

Congratulations, Dave...You have reached the top...

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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

its time for men to wake up and change the world if they ever will. good write87541

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Poetheart Morgan 20 August 2013

Darkness exist when you prevents the entry of light. But light is there, out side, waiting for your turn. Is up to us let it come in or not.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message.

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 August 2013

So true....we are responsible for what we are reaping.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 August 2013

We have no one to blame but ourselves truth there, Dave.

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