The lights are gone
we are in the dark
the world will not see
when the sun goes down
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A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it.
In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you
Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave
Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too.
Wonderful words Dave. I am sure we all have a big understanding of exactly where you are coming from. how will it be in another 20 years? thank You
We did indeed Dave - and well done from me on reaching the no 1 slot.
nature is to be protected not destroyed by man. but they are doing a pretty good job of it good read
my people Iranian guys during the history they always had blamed others rather to blame themselves for their mistakes and lags.we have to blame ourselves first then blame others with a definite vision. your poem sir is so great :)
Straight to the point and so beautifully expressed! Congratulations Dave on reaching the top.
We destroy nature and don't care about consequences. Message conveyed beautifully. Also congratulations on reaching the top.
its time for men to wake up and change the world if they ever will. good write87541
Darkness exist when you prevents the entry of light. But light is there, out side, waiting for your turn. Is up to us let it come in or not.
Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message.
We have no one to blame but ourselves truth there, Dave.
brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy!