Thursday, July 17, 2008

In The Dark Comments

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As darkness falls, a silent figure slithers forth on stockinged feet
Muffled steps on hardwood floors breached bedroom door without a creak
Uneven steps mark the time as lips seeks trough to slake this squalor
Conscience left postponed for now; as lava runs white hot and shallow
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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.
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Laila lili 13 September 2009

well... words are unable to express about its beautifull ideas really i didnt feel the time while i was reading and i surprised about the way it goes on i enjoyed reading it and i like your ideas alot i wonder why is noone read it? ? ? ? ? lool thanks for sharing laila

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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Jacksonville, Florida
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