Tuesday, March 5, 2019

In The Casket Of My Heart! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the casket of my heart
There little ferries row
And sunlight goes to make them shine
As fishes lay with sorrow
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Naila Rais
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Anil Kumar Panda 27 March 2019

A sweet poem indeed with beautiful rhyming and flow. Loved it. Thanks for posting.

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Naila Rais 23 December 2019

Thanks a lot....visit again dir!

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Prabir Gayen 27 March 2019

I visit again....bea beautiful poem dear poetess...thanks 1000000+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 March 2019

ok you may ignore my editt advice NR

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Naila Rais 11 March 2019

Nothing is like that sir............ It's fine like this.....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 March 2019

beautiful heart felt poetry but just do edit it only praises do not seek it will limit your higher seat elevate urself and fairies meet ' 'twill be for all a real treat NR good upcoming poetess well done in this one

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Abhipsa Panda 07 March 2019

Lines full of life...well penned dear naila...10

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Naila Rais 07 March 2019

Thanks so much.... ........... :) Naila

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Prabir Gayen 06 March 2019

In the deep vein of my heart There little candle glow And words go to make it glaze As charming breeze blow! ... Beautiful....your heart is mystic

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Naila Rais 06 March 2019

Ohhhh! ! Thnx Naila

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blank blank 06 March 2019

oh! something i would wish i could write myself, the dim lit candle is the sparkle of hope i sustained and wrote about for years! ! thanks for the read

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Naila Rais 06 March 2019

Thanks for your words maam.... Naila

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