Wednesday, June 25, 2008

In The Box, Under My Bed Comments

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Am I crazy?
Or crazy in love?
Your so flawless,
So perfect through my eyes.
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Jessica Elizondo
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Zachary Glitch 17 December 2009

Aaaaaaaahhhhhh... The feeling of longing love. How I know it all too well. Very wonderfully said, and you capture the feeling as if it were a prisoner of war. I give it a 10.

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Arabian Heart 16 September 2008

A boxed heart that is new to me I wonder if the box is enough to protect keep it close to your heart always. such a sweet thing my heart feels from you

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wow! ! ! ! that line i put in my poem, you lead the most distinguished poet is a understaitment......i love this poem....10/10

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Bianca J. Walker 25 June 2008

A very sincere and enchanting poem.

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Evaughn Gray 25 June 2008

wow that's good..nice feelings u let out.~Hazel

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Serenity Prayer 25 June 2008

aww its so sweet. i love the last line. very well done. excellent! !

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Let me know the out come...=].....very lovetastic

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