In The Blink Of An Eye Comments

Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived... beautyful! thanks my friend

Unwilling to be strong Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived.....thinking about the past and reflecting to save the love and the relationship.. thank u dear poetess.. dev

thoughtful saying - Sadly we were destined never to last great 10++

Lovely lines filled with a laudable lesson! Leaving the baggage is not always easy but it is necessary for survival. Well done!

Sad write but smart decision. Thank you for sharing

‘In The Blink Of An Eye’ is a sweet little poem! I find the epitome of the poem in the last two lines. Thanks for sharing. You may like to read my poem ‘Ode to My Conscience’. Thank you!

Life is too short We'll have to accept What we've got... good piece

Thank you Antipas i am happy you enjoyed x

Beautiful! The portrayal of such sadness in such a calm manner is inspirational. Keep it up.

Thank you Robert your are too kind x

Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived A nicely crafted poem, short yet satisfying.The pulses of human temperament well dealt with.10 Subhas

Thank you Alison Mujati x

Well written keep it up... You can also read my Nerve of poetry

we do not live in an ideal world and you have well captured the realities of life...

Thank you Chinedu... so lovely of you to say xxx

The temperamental and whimsical nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. A well drafted piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Susette.