Thursday, January 13, 2011

*'In The Beginning Was The Word' Comments

Rating: 2.7

but now the lake of words is dry
the eyes produce no rain
from clouds of thoughts
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Original Unknown Girl 26 November 2013

Oh I do love reading your words. Have missed your poetry dear One, and you. HG: -) xx

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Miroslava Odalovic 27 November 2012

Wonderful poem! I dwelled on the word silence in English language and was sorry it refers to the state of mind like 'I am silent' but never to the process unless it requires an object 'He was silenced'. Wonderful writing in terms of everything especially in terms of going back to the meaning of speech itself. Just look at all the thoughts you've given me :) thanks.

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Hans Vr 09 October 2012

Your poetry is unique.The verses are pure beauty but What is between them is as exciting Please keep writing poetry

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Herbert Nehrlich1 08 March 2012

Excellent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Tai Chi Italy 13 January 2011

So you have writers block? Or you did! lol Beautifully put 2nd stanza! lol Thi imagery is startling and the conclusion, refreshing. The title? Mmmmmm Smiiling at you Tai

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