In The Beginning... (An Alternative Account) Comments

After this poem – I saw you around as a field of buttercups. But - This poem made me upset a little. I see 2 supercilious jerks, who want to eat another apple just because they didn’t know what a pear means. Well, it is the beginning of relations with God. It’s just his love dictates like this. If He asks not to chew a gum – you shouldn’t chew it just out of respect, just to show your love to Him by this. And they lost such great relations with Him that these 2 jerks can’t even imagine…. It doesn't cost billions of apples.

...and spoke in a voice much louder than the one in which he spoke to the woman In these lines - is the truth. Beautifully written poem.