In The Beginning Comments

It's fascinating to read your poem. Last stanza is superb. Human beings have always been intrigued by the nature of the universe, how life began...thanks for sharing.

None could fathom the atom and none could see it but they felt well its power. Its indivisible energy parted in all directions. Every manifestation has greater responsibility. This poem is excellently penned with greatness....10

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While human anxiety is still exploring the origin of life in the universe we have a clear account of it in our four Vedas and six Sastras which are still supplemented by Ithihasas, Puranas, Smrithis, Sruthisand so on. Its a great thing that human minds have been created which is the wonder child bof its Beauteous inlay and intricate design. Marvellous and beautiful....10

so beautifully instructural every Poet on PH must read it Hope they will make it POEM OF TODAY IF NOT THEN SOME DAY ANY DAY PH MAY such IMMENSE CONCENTRATION OF ENERGY LIKE NOW WE HAVE THE HUMAN MIND POET ME KIND Thanks for EDUCATING ALL MA'AM Did you also read my XY THEORY

so beautifully instructural every Poet on PH must read it Hope they will make it POEM OF TODAY IF NOT THEN SOME DAY ANY DAY PH MAY such IMMENSE CONCENTRATION OF ENERGY LIKE NOW WE HAVE THE HUMAN MIND POET ME KIND Thanks for EDUCATING ALL MA'AM

yikes! it's long, the poem, NOT the Supreme Being, ...though " It" may be long also. " a million earS" ha ha. " Unknown sought to become known." this, too, can be said of some P H poets! " humans" all contain a bit of 'the beast' i believe, but also a bit of 'the beauty'. " Our human mind became a wonder child of its " ..." its" OR " Its" ? i don't know. i like it. to MyPoemList. bri :)

In the Beginning, a beautiful piece of work. In the beginning there was nothing nothingness prevailed. For, nought has immense potentiality. A day might come when when a huge black-hole starts devouring stars and galaxies, and one day nothing remains. And then one remote day this black-hole explodes to be another BigBang!

This is sterling penning. The origin of life on earth is an eternally fascinating topic and this poem captures it so vividly yet so poetically that leaves the reader awed by the enormity of theme and the mastery of language.

On time's infinite wings the beginning of creation floats with fathomless perception. The marvelous complexity with humility we notice. Your powerful perception about creation is definitely brought up with care and dignity and this poem is interestingly penned. A nice poem is shared with care and beauty.10