In The Beginning! Comments

Hello dear friend, a lot to feel, you always do that to me with your poems! ! Here are my thoughts for now(please don't mind me, only bubbling) , of course I can't be right so I expect to anger nobody.. You tell the story of an old book, every book has a dropp of truth and this one might have rivers.. but yet for many, not really proved.. some teaches of the bible are not bad I wouldn't say no to be taught to my child.. But me myself I got a thousand wonders and see(history proves it) how we humans always get things wrong.. What if we got it wrong again what if you've got the point? What if there was a god or more? what if he made the earth to be eden? Then if he made us in his image then I suppose we shall be gods, we shall love and trust each other and everything here in this world and other's isn't it? An angry god is not the real god, he she or they are supposed to understand love and forgive because this are the most precious things humans cannot hold to keep forever seems.. Why? maybe because we waste our love? .. on only One person, god or thing even pet to love but we almost ignore our family, neighbours, colleagues of work, the strangers and so on..What if we would try to be good like gods the ones we pray at deep inside the ones we love not the ones we fear? .. This poem made me to roll to the right roll to the left sit up straight and upside-down haunted my soul and all I can come up is only wonder? ! See? your poems are sticking to the soul maybe you are made for writing thank you!

'Genesis' in poetry? nice moving in good story :) _Unwritten Soul