Friday, April 16, 2010

In The Beginning Comments

Rating: 1.9

WHEN sunshine met the wave,
Then love was born;
Then Venus rose to save
A world forlorn.
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Harriet Monroe
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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 December 2021

Congratulations being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Poet Of The Day, hoorray! Gorgeously thought and written

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 December 2021

So undescribable beautiful, loveliest worded by the great Poetess Harriet Monroe.5 Stars full for this gem in Classical poetry

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 December 2021

The loveliest poem I ever read about The Beginning of the World, sooo very touching sweetest loveliest, I could jump based upon greatest joy and happiness

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 January 2016

When Sunshine met the wave Then love was born Then Venus rose to save A world forlorn. Awesome write. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 04 December 2015

I especially like the lines 'For light a thousand wings Of joy unfurled, And bound with golden rings The icy world. And color flamed the earth With glad desire, ' raises possibilities

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Lubinda Lubinda 04 December 2015

I like the idea that the world sprung from simple things like light and water, its an awesome way to look at the creation of the world. great piece, thanx for sharing.

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Kevin Patrick 04 December 2015

A simple and imaginative work, its simplicity makes it easy to remember, filled with a lot of new age spiritual mysticism before such concepts were popular.

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Driss Ezzireg 04 December 2015

The fusion of light and water is electrifying.It ignites the world.Splendid!

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Shahin Latif 04 December 2015

My pleasure. This is so nice poem.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 04 December 2015

Nice, but one of her poems that I love best is, A Play Festival in Ogden Park. I highly recommend everyone read it. I noticed the name of the poem first, as we have Ogden, Utah near me.

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Oladoyin Micheal 04 December 2015

'Tis a poem rich in alternating rhyme. What a nice poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2015

With glad desire to respect nature. Nice work.

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Kim Barney 04 December 2015

If Harriet Monroe is number 409 on the top 500 poets, and if this poem of hers is good enough to be selected as poem of the day, why does it only have a rating of 3.7 out of ten, based on 274 votes? I wouldn't rate it QUITE that low, but it really isn't anything special.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

Then Venus rose to save A world forlorn Awe some philosophy and realistic too. The Venus had truely saved the world from being forlorn. She made it worth living.Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.

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Sokhen Tudu 04 December 2015

I am entertained reading this poem.

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M Asim Nehal 04 December 2015

Superb imagery and nice flow, I liked it well written.10

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