In The Back Of My Mind Comments
*- Once more, a challenge from my sister. She gave me the title and said 'Write something. I know you can do it.' With her around, I'll probably never get writers' block! ! ! -*
In the back of my mind, though I’m smiling,
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The first verse is brilliant, suggesting hidden depths and secrets at the back of anybody's mind. It made me want to read on, which is always good in a poem.
Paige: The beautiful rythmic nature of your poems are a gift from God. Keep writing and I give you a ten. See My poem I Want to Live. Your friend Lynn
Such a beautiful flow to this poem Paige. Your sister sure knows to press your buttons! You imagery too is fabulous. Bringing sound into the picture makes it even more vivid. Excellent 10 Karin Anderson
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7/18/2025 4:31:23 PM # 1.0.0
Another clever poem and so true. I know exactly what you mean. Ruthy