Tuesday, March 1, 2016

In The Awe Of The Universe Comments

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every message needs
both a clarifying theme
and, an exemplifying diatribe
must describe either infinite beauty
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Michael Walkerjohn
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Chuy Amante 17 May 2020

Indeed The Awe of ths UNI verse as are we one! sing it as you well do thru that heart!

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Harindhar Reddy 16 April 2020

My dearest bard whose chariot is pulled by a courageous horses. Well written and well said perfection has no patent rights but a potential worth. You are class act as you can weigh any theme with a balance. Cheers!

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Part 1: Aloha Harindhar and Cheers Young Brother! I, need a chariot? I do so appreciate the 'shrubbery; ' truthfully it is never necessary... that that perfection thingy... no human will ever come near perfection... no worries... flowers do... patent and potential... how about calm and reassuring?

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part 2: Caste act? I, can weigh any.... theme balancing... that is simply an act... IAM not a game show host! I toss a few words... whatever... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2018

Energies flowing into your moments! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Michael Walkerjohn 05 January 2019

Aloha Edward... Cheers! Oops I missed this one... again! Thank you for having a further visit into my posts... hoping you may find the one that really twerks yer mind! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Michael Walkerjohn 19 May 2016

Aloha Frank... My Good Sir, my friend, my fellow bard... You have expressed the maxium... and I humbly thank you... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 March 2016

A great too work, Michael.Do propose me some of your poems to translate into ellenic [greek].

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Michael Walkerjohn 07 March 2016

Aloha Dimitrios... I thank you again good sir, for this offer... perhaps the post titled Last Call would be the one to work with... I leave this in your capable hands... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 March 2016

I'm looking up which of your poems could I translate into greek, work I have already done for a lot of other poets.

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Michael Walkerjohn 07 March 2016

Aloha Dimitrios... It is so rewarding for me to have you visit and read a few words of these prose that I post... Some are better than others... and there is a bigger body of works on the www I do realized that you are extremely busy... and at times IAM also... To have you express an interest as you have done so in helping in this is wonderful and awesome... There is no one post that I can suggest... for the translation is the most important part... Is a word for word translation possible that will take the entire write into a communicable prose in the Greek? Should one of these writes of mine allow that, this would be very special to me... Perhaps then, some of my acquaintances from my earlier daze may recognize those as my words... I worked in Saudi Arabia for many years, one of the companies within my projects was Basmah... and the construction management staff were all men from Greece... they were a great group of men... and later, in early 2000's, I was able to build the foundation of the home of one of the Tsakopoulos brothers in Sacramento, California... George and Angelo sat and spoke with our crew in the olive garden beside the site on many occasions... and these men were some special folk... but one of the more important acquaintances was Giorgio Modena (chief draftsman) Dhahran Engineering Department, Aramco... He was an invaluable mentor... so I do have a high stake on the table... I offer my entire body of work for your use... I humbly thank you for this offer... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2016

Clarifying theme very wonderful structure is constructed for this poem. Very thought provoking poem definitely. Discovering self in awe of universe is interesting and amazing.10

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Michael Walkerjohn 01 March 2016

Aloha Kumarmani... I thank you good sir, for this visit, read, and for your very concise and most educated comments... I offer this to you... take this post and copy to file... center justify, highlight text... and consider the probability that the true form of this write... is possibly both upside down and backward... a matter of perspective with the thought of the universe paramount in the mind... for truly, exactly how are we, or more specifically, how is our planet hung... in the greater scheme of things... as in what direction is up? For indeed, most of our species does so walk on their heads! IAM currently making an effort to more closely review the bards that read me... it is of a curious politeness that I do this... You, my kind friend are well read, consistently receiving accolades for your works... impressive... and some of these posts mirror closely my most personal thoughts... I would ask of you... should there be some post of mine, that you see value in... Would you kindly consider possibly translating it... in the tongue of your Grandfather', and flying it? Nothing for me as gain is at all necessary... IAM more modestly interested in syntax... as in can my words be arranged so that the online translation tools will perfectly translate, a word for word example of my prose... We, have so much worth to share with the readership and the universe... and our works of words do have the potential to bring our thoughts into play... on that basis... as once flown... these words will survive the all of time... I thank you again for your most kind comments... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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