Wednesday, September 23, 2009

In The Air Pocket Comments

Rating: 5.0

From all pressures of worldly mission
Suddenly got into an Air pocket situation
It’s in that local region and space
I lost my height and pace.
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Shashendra Amalshan 16 October 2009

'Air Pocket Lesson'... Very interesting poem indeed. As the old saying goes 'Vidi Writes writes great poems'.. Hats off! ! nice work here 10++ lovess Shan

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Indira Renganathan 06 October 2009

Up and down is common with everyone...only thing, we have to remind ourselves is that every sorrow or happiness is a passing cloud....nice read...and thank you for your wise comments on my poems Vidi

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Mamta Agarwal 06 October 2009

you deliver with lively wit and humour lessons we learn on our ride in this worldly strife. very reflective Mamta

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 September 2009

a poem which could be read at different levels...lovely

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Bob Blackwell 24 September 2009

Vidi, you write very well, this is an interesting write, which makes one think. Bob

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~ Jon London ~ 24 September 2009

Vidi my dear friend...So lovely to have you here posting again....And this poem just goes to show, that your poetry is one to be admired....Rich in reflection that delivers this beautifully expressed poem with SHINE! ! ! ! Great work 10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 September 2009

good poem... very much reflective...thanks...10

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