*in The Afterglow, A Couple Sleeps Comments

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is so very passionate indeed.. lovely to read.. very visual..you painted the scene well.. this is sweet and lovely, I am kinda lost for words after reading this one.... nice.. with lots of lovesss shan

This awesome arrangement of carefully selected words conjures and almost photographic image before the reader's eyes - a beautiful and sensual image. And then there's those two closing lines, which somehow manage to touch the heart with a message deeper than the visual experience. I love it! S :)

...lovely..lovely..lovely...such a convincing gentle depiction.. :)