Tuesday, May 7, 2019

In That Within Pause Lightness - Inspired By In That Without Pause Darkness By M.J. Lemon Comments

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Some see challenges
In obstacles faced
Some see such obstacles
In challenges stone-faced
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Richard Wlodarski
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Mj Lemon 07 May 2019

The light in the stoicism....sometimes there's no need for flashiness in order for one to thrive in the light. This is a terrific verse, Richard. And thank you so much.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 October 2024

A great play on words in your very positive constructive criticism. And more inspiration for yet another poem! Can't thank you enough!

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2019

I choose to see White Light Where the black dog resides And thus, unleash freedom /// wow great expressive; me too

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Richard Wlodarski 17 October 2024

That's the best way to be, Mahtab! Thanks for reading and responding in a positive light!

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