Some see challenges
In obstacles faced
Some see such obstacles
In challenges stone-faced
I choose to see White Light
Where the black dog resides
And thus, unleash freedom
I choose to see White Light Where the black dog resides And thus, unleash freedom /// wow great expressive; me too
That's the best way to be, Mahtab! Thanks for reading and responding in a positive light!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The light in the stoicism....sometimes there's no need for flashiness in order for one to thrive in the light. This is a terrific verse, Richard. And thank you so much.
A great play on words in your very positive constructive criticism. And more inspiration for yet another poem! Can't thank you enough!