In That Pleasing Place She And Me Comments

What a journey of falling in love- an amazement like that of Alice in Wonderland. You seem to have lost in 'that Pleasing Place. It was good fun to read this pleasant poem.

Wonderful imagery, fantastic style.

The passion, the rapture, the capture of your heart :) So differently said.

An exceptional write from you here Sarwar, every line kept me interested, 10 Lynda xx

This was a wonderful piece. So full of imagery and I like the way you layed it out here. It made it fun to read as well. Excellent job.

delighted and wonderful write...........spellbound....

A wonderful poem, Sarwar. Powerful thoughts overwhelmed by experimental structure and format. Great write indeed...10/10. Naseer

you are exceptional indeed... Very entertaining read... Hey Sarwar you said you shifted from different site to PH.. I am so thankful you did.. cause you are some special poet in this site. Adds something different to the site. Some are kinda making a scene out this rating thing.. I feel your works of art deserves much more than a ten.. Thanks for sharing your talents... cheers shan

This is the first time I am seeing poetry in a different format, in a zig-zag pattern. The idea sounds good.

wow need I say more YOUR THE BEST A++ and 10++ lots of love anjali

very cool design and format! Creative ideas! Nice words! Nice formation! Very well penned!

A to Z, nothing in between........ symbols float........great poetic shots........all sounds melt..........all forms dissolve........all shackles of the language break.........in that pleasing place she and me communicate. Sarwar, it is written in a fine poetic frezy with multiple experiments in structure. Kudos for your inventive skill. CP[

this is indeed a stunning write, my friend..Well crafted..

A highly creative write taking the reader on a entertaining ride.10+++

Wow, first I would like to echo Mamta's comments, it is a poem of many things. Did I fall down a rabbit hole, to fall into a magical dream filled with masterpieces of art that float past my eye, or was it my desire gone beserk. 10+

Wow...Brilliance indeed my friend. You have used finely an onomatopoeia word followed by a nice repeatition and oxymoron........well crafted! ! ! you have taken me to a great poetic journey from Annabelle Lee of Edgar Allan Poe to a famous fairy tale of Alice in Wonderland laddering the poetic structure and innovative mind of yours.........10++++++++++++

i'm speechless! your wrinting skill drive us into a marvelous world.

i must say love takes you places...and what places! ...are you sure you won't tire her out? ! ! ;)

Greatness comes from each dropp of ink you place here Sarwar....another fine example of your poetic talent with this loving share piece...well expressed feeling of love my friend...a great voyage indeed 10++++

A VOYAGE OF EJOYABLE LOVE EXCELLENT 10