Friday, January 16, 2009

In That Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun still shone,
The birds still sang,
The children laughed,
The world went on.
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Jade Heathfield
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 January 2009

A sad but well written poem. It is good that you can be strong in that moments of parting. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Tom Balch 18 January 2009

A well crafted and heartfelt piece,10 regards Tom

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Cory Jensen 16 January 2009

I loved it....I'll be sure to keep up with your new poems

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Jade Heathfield

Jade Heathfield

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