Tuesday, September 11, 2007

**in Terms Of Time Comments

Rating: 2.7

the way the sun reflects off matter
around 3 pm on sunny balmy pre-autumn holidays

where there are usually throngs of people milling about
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Jon Alan
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G. Murdock 18 November 2008

This is a great portrait from the imagination . I enjoyed the threat which became a ghost. The portent still glaring from the alcove of the brow.

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 12 September 2007

I love the imagery used in this poem, so vivid

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