Monday, February 4, 2008

In Tarmac Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warrington, the sixties.

When my children cry boredom
I look back and see
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jane solanrobertson
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Neil Solan 29 August 2008

This is my favourite. Though I played British Bulldog too..........It's got a great title

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Patrick McFarland 10 February 2008

I really like the way you are able to change gears with your poems. I was surprised at the upbeat and carefree feeling of this piece. From what I have read so far, your poetry flows effortlessly between dark and light. Brilliant.

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Bill Smith 04 February 2008

enjoyed the read, sugar butties, makes you wonder what memories the kids of today will have 'we stood on street corners and shouted abuse' not much charm in that smiffy

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jane solanrobertson

warrington, england
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