Saturday, April 9, 2022

In Taoist Form - Short Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Each bone contains a story of our restless spirit,
The complex pattern tells many things.
It's like nature adapting to change ~
The depth of our understanding engraved -
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

Wonderfully penned...10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

Brilliant poem Asim ji.The depth of our understanding engraved - on the rocks we moved, while we lived.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2022

What an incredibly wise, beautiful and fresh take on life and death! What poetry is all about!

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Mamta S 10 April 2022

Wise words from one and the only MAN.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2022

Bravo! I enjoyed it very much Doc

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 April 2022

Deep one! !

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Rebecca Navarre 09 April 2022

Wow! .. Magnificent thoughts so eloquently and beautifully described! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Shreya Hacks 09 April 2022

Awesome poem

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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