Wednesday, May 15, 2019

In Tantrum Comments

Rating: 4.8

I cannot be without you
My love and affection inside will die.
My dreams evaporate
If you don't remain in my sky.
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Amitava Sur
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Suresh Kumar Ek 17 September 2020

the total tantrum is well depicte``d

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2019

A poem that poignantly recalls the pain of losing the beloved- someone without whom the poet is 'in a total tantrum'.

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Hans Vr 22 July 2019

A beautiful and heart moving poem. I wish you and pray for so much strength.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 May 2019

Amitava, a very poignant and intense poem, your love is easily seen in your words, the anger of losing your wife has had a lasting effect on your innocent heart. This poem is so endearing yet sad with the silence of her death. 100 - 10's I'd give this poem, if possible. Thank you for sharing!

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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