~ In Sunglass ~ Shoeing ~ Comments

A bewildering poetry... Definitely a differnt shade of poetic mind... I'm sure many poets have such feeling in some time... '...Eyes ~ Bilking/In Sunglass ~ Shoeing.'...here it climaxed.. Wow Sunglass shoeing...very aptly juxta posed... 10++

Very interesting. Lovely summertime feel...like losing ourselves at the beach, only, it's in poetry. Fascinating perspective. The vocabulary wasn't easily comprehensible, but it was enjoyable.

You have shortlisted a few punches to make out a good poem. Keep it up.

Interesting poem but nicely done Thanks for sharing with me

I love the way you force the reader to think about what you are saying in your poem....... brilliantly put together....

niv your up and flying with this spectacular