Saturday, November 21, 2020

In Spite Of Trying Comments

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In spite of trying

I have forsaken willingly large material treasure
Only to conquer you,
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dipak adhya
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Mahtab Bangalee 21 November 2020

I felt What a foolish man am I, I could not leave my pride And still count what did I, I am still engrossed in my loss and gain I am unable to be the sun In spite of trying to be in vain/// this type feelings help the discover the self; good write on knowing thyself

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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2020

Loved the poem because of its spirituality. Your efforts at conquering spirituality is appreciable. 'Oh! I felt What a foolish man am I, I could not leave my pride And still count what did I' - after all, we are human beings. To err is human.The realisation of one's own folly is a right step towards attaining spirituality.

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