In Sorrow Comments

this is really good sylvia, what inspired you to write this? whatever your inspirating is, hold on to it&keep it up.....melissa

extremely good poem.....i loved it

Good poem Sylvia keep writing and i will keep reading

In sorrow That must be no follow This is the one Who, with borrow Talks about it Without being in a hollow So meaningfull poem of yours..sylvia chidi

that poem is my insperashon thanx i give u a coment when i put it up but heres a preveu: love fragiel as a rose hollow sorrow it douse grow each mineat left in life is equivelent to a nother knife and as the rose withers and dies so dose the harets of its admier i just rushed it so sory for the mistakes

i love every word of it.. it show us that the love we share is only here for a short time.