In Some Time...Just A Few Years Away Comments

An excellent poem to read! 'When the clock turns in my favour n things change When you reach for me I will be out of your range' - that's good, that's reassuring. You should not go close to the betrayer again! That's a justifiable conclusion.

For my thoughts will fill your heart With a regret that will make your eyes smart.... Seeking forgiveness when you seek me I will be too far away for you to see.... //.... There is no feeling of remorse, revenge or ill-will for the one who has parted ways but a bit of chance for that person to mend his ways to shore up a relationship before its final demise. Immaculate expression. Thanks for sharing.

Try to find that hope once again! And move on. Nice work.

a very nice poem dear poet........lovely poem! keep sharing such lovely ones

Another beautiful write, thanks for sharing.