Saturday, November 8, 2008

In Solitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

On this cold November setting,
Painted above is the old gray sky;
A glimpse from the sun in sight,
Wearing a mystique smile.
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Dee Geyrozaga
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 04 September 2024

The anguish of separation from the beloved, albeit presumably temporarily, is really moving.. good poem. Top score.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 November 2008

Truley moving beautiful poetry, you feel the emotion in every word... Andrew 10

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Fiona Davidson 08 November 2008

Beautiful sad story..well written really paints a picture for me...thank you..

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