Monday, July 22, 2019

In Solitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time after time I juggled
Between waking up and sleeping
I remember how we chuckled
Over cans of beer we're drinking
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Carmina Abrenica
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Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2019

I remember that moment we were here together As I felt the heat in my body greasing Snail-paced, I laid perfectly soaking All I can hear is my own breathing//// written beautifully on the solitude but in love

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Chinedu Dike 29 July 2019

A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Carmina.

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Carmina Abrenica 30 July 2019

Thank you and God bless

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Wonderful poem Carmina.I like your style of writing. Thank you for sharing. Mario odekerken

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Carmina Abrenica 28 July 2019

Thank you very much. Well appreciated feedback 😊

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