Thursday, July 26, 2018

In Sleep... Comments

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How many thousands...
Are at this hour asleep! O gentle sleep,
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Nosheen Irfan 01 August 2018

Great depth as usual Daniel. Two different perspectives put forth with such finesse n flair. Nothing more terrible than a sleepless night and nothing more beautiful than sound sleep. And dawn is of course the end of the agony and anguish of a troubled night. I can feel the sunshine suffusing me with new vigor and hope as i read the last stanza.

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Glen Kappy 28 July 2018

Hey, Daniel! Hope this finds you well. An interesting pairing in parts I and II. Part I made me think of sleepless times as in my poems Awake at 2 A.M. and Awake at 3 A.M. Part II reminds me of those dreams that gave my perspective a boost or needed readjustment as in Dolphin Dream or I Was Visited or Dream Debut. Blessed be sleep and the sleeplessness that helps us appreciate it. -Glen

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