Monday, September 5, 2016

In Silence Comments

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In silence, I monitor an undernourished baby's cry
When a mosquito hovering near my mosquito net
Maneuvers near a cot to bite the baby and to fly a lie
In which the gnat believes when it misses the target.
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John Sensele
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Simon Mwila 01 March 2017

Sobre, Intruiging.. Thank you

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John Sensele 19 March 2017

You're welcome, Simon.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

I gather my thoughts! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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John Sensele 05 September 2016

Always honoured to see your dissection, Edward. Much appreciated. God bless you, John

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 September 2016

In silence, my heart bleeds when a child repelled by parental neglect Runs into streets of Kitwe Business District to a life of brutality Sleeping in the open, feeding and scavenging for food crumbs tycoons elect Great poem with so compassionate a message. Thanks poet for sharing such a nice poem.10++ for it. Subhas

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John Sensele 05 September 2016

Much appreciated, Subhas. It's comments such as yours that give me a reason to continue polishing my poetry craft. God bless you, John

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Ndola, Zambia
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