Tuesday, October 13, 2015

In Sebastian's Bar Comments

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So, traveler, you've heard of us
on your travels. I'm not surprised.
Word travels fast, but actions even
faster. I should know, I've been
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Daniel Brick
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Leah Ayliffe 24 October 2015

Absolutely gorgeous. Sad dreamers, travellers, looking for a miracle in a place where all types of people go to looking for answers, knowing they will not find what they are looking for. Yet there is comfort in it, maybe in knowing that there are multiple people all looking for something more.

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Rahman Henry 23 October 2015

Wow. I like to visit Sibastian's bar. wonderful poem.

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

I probably take too much liberty with my interpretations of your poetry. But that may be part of your intent. Thanks, Daniel

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Pamela Sinicrope 13 October 2015

So I have wondered about the bartender after I read your first Port Trakl piece. I wonder why he thinks the way he does....why he feels the way he does towards his patrons? What is it like tending bar in Port Trakl? The perspectives you are providing are painting a colorful picture. The sun rises! :) What are the rumored miracles? Where does he go when he's not tending the bar? Why is he there? Why! :)

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St. Paul MN
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