I seek the truth
From where the ideation of this universe
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The first poem was great congradulation p 3 Another good piece of artistry p 4 trouble spots in its beginning then it takes off p 5 good as well You have good expressive talents Could your work be better then what is seen You tell me Love your style
a beautiful thoughtful poem. each part is a story within itself.
The TRUTH is much needed in life! Able to unite us on earth. Nice work.