In Search Of Peace! Comments

Excellently written with a great rhyming scheme! May you find your peace!

A beautiful poem... loved the humble poetic expression. Top score.

I am happy that you could find peace in your entity.nice poem.

A beautiful poem with rhythmic words. We are in constant search! Sometimes, the search never ends. Blessed are the people who realise that happiness is within the self. So well portrayed Aarzoo!

I have searched the world Only to find hearts so cold People so insensitive n ruthless My feelings seem so worthless Tired of wandering & searching A broken heart I was nursing finally i found my own peace with my entity. very thought provoking. actually this is the experience of all who had to suffer a lot especially when others do not understand the heavings of a poetic heart. this i s my own story. thank you dear poetess. tony

In loneliness we build a great personality that is further than our imagination, Thank you for sharing.

Tired of running away from reality I found peace within my own entity Very uplifting lines. Another beautiful poem from your pen. You have expressed your sense of disillusionment with a lovely choice of words and believe me you are not alone in feeling this way about the world.10 with all my heart.

Disillusioned by the hypocrisy and disheartened by the insensitivity of the people around, you were in search of peace! At the end of this frantic search, you discovered that truth can be found only within oneself! This is the sane realization most of us arrive at when we look for peace and happiness! No external factor can guarantee us lasting peace! Enjoyed this rhyming poem!

Yes, peace must first be found within one's self

Finding peace in our own entity. This is very nice. Thank you for sharing it.

Ruthless! ! ! With the wickedness of mankind on earth; but, peace is true love! Found in the laws of righteousness. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.