Sunday, August 2, 2015

In Search Of Integrity. Comments

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O! my self! poor self! ,
What do you crave for?
Don't you know?
The gifts of God lie,
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2018

That no material wealth accompanies, And you depart alone, But you accumulate, In the coffin of wealth, O Abdulrazak. That no material wealth accompanies, And you depart alone, But you accumulate, In the coffin of wealth, O Abdulrazak. very intriguing poem well done in the coffins have some fun lol

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 04 September 2018

A NICE POEM............

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2018

an introspective writings well penned great 10+++

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Savita Tyagi 10 September 2017

Beautiful poem with inspirational expressions. Thanks for sharing.

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Subbaraman N V 04 March 2017

A great thought and a nice expression. Congrats.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 November 2016

An excellent write, full of wisdom. A very thoughtful n thought-provoking poem.10

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Denis Mair 20 July 2016

Eschewing the coffin of whims, pride, masks, wealth, tomorrows and plots, Let us remain in the cradle of endurance, To grow ever more steadfast, humble, genuine, thrifty, ready, diligent and unconniving. Beware of attempts to seize profit for oneself alone: What stifles in a day will encase us over years Blocking access to the eternal dimension of soul!

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A compelling and creative cry that shows the vanity of externals, Well worded introspective ideas!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 12 December 2015

A poem of self search and beautifully done. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Raymond Farrell 11 December 2015

This is a poem with higher sentiments written by a man with a conscience that is not seared before God. Thank you for contributing your poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 December 2015

extraordinary poetry How I wish i had even thought of it composing such a poem by me is out of question says poet yeps poet you have mastery I am still learning!

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Pijush Biswas 05 December 2015

very beautiful poem on self. like it thanks

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Sayeed Abubakar 02 December 2015

Really a nice poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

thank you for this self provoking poem-10

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Scharlie Meeuws 01 November 2015

Very thought provoking. I really like your poem, it carries all the filosophy of life in its few lines....

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Maria Gonzalez 26 October 2015

Very well written, with lessons from the other side. It is always good to look on both sides of the coin and then attempt to sit on the rim. Lovely poem.

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2015

this is a pessimistic view of the poet..........but the absolute truth is rightly spoken...........i really liked the way you carried the beautiful theme of your work till the end.........very nice work...great job.

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Agatha Eliza 24 October 2015

Another beautifully written poem; I perceive it like a sincere confession...All the doubts and insecurities of life that lead to the path we later follow. The real gifts that make a person special are rather spiritual, than material.10 +++

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

very wise combination of questions and answers to self! want to reread it! add to favorites! But you pass time, In the coffin of 'tomorrows',

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Shakil Ahmed 10 October 2015

a well composed poem expressing the ultimate truth of life. the poem fully conform Sir Philip Sydney's definition of poem where he says' poetry teaches us delightfully'really the poem has a message for the whole human race.

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