O! my self! poor self! ,
What do you crave for?
Don't you know?
The gifts of God lie,
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Beautiful poem with inspirational expressions. Thanks for sharing.
An excellent write, full of wisdom. A very thoughtful n thought-provoking poem.10
Eschewing the coffin of whims, pride, masks, wealth, tomorrows and plots, Let us remain in the cradle of endurance, To grow ever more steadfast, humble, genuine, thrifty, ready, diligent and unconniving. Beware of attempts to seize profit for oneself alone: What stifles in a day will encase us over years Blocking access to the eternal dimension of soul!
A compelling and creative cry that shows the vanity of externals, Well worded introspective ideas!
A poem of self search and beautifully done. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
This is a poem with higher sentiments written by a man with a conscience that is not seared before God. Thank you for contributing your poem.
extraordinary poetry How I wish i had even thought of it composing such a poem by me is out of question says poet yeps poet you have mastery I am still learning!
Very thought provoking. I really like your poem, it carries all the filosophy of life in its few lines....
Very well written, with lessons from the other side. It is always good to look on both sides of the coin and then attempt to sit on the rim. Lovely poem.
this is a pessimistic view of the poet..........but the absolute truth is rightly spoken...........i really liked the way you carried the beautiful theme of your work till the end.........very nice work...great job.
Another beautifully written poem; I perceive it like a sincere confession...All the doubts and insecurities of life that lead to the path we later follow. The real gifts that make a person special are rather spiritual, than material.10 +++
very wise combination of questions and answers to self! want to reread it! add to favorites! But you pass time, In the coffin of 'tomorrows',
a well composed poem expressing the ultimate truth of life. the poem fully conform Sir Philip Sydney's definition of poem where he says' poetry teaches us delightfully'really the poem has a message for the whole human race.
That no material wealth accompanies, And you depart alone, But you accumulate, In the coffin of wealth, O Abdulrazak. That no material wealth accompanies, And you depart alone, But you accumulate, In the coffin of wealth, O Abdulrazak. very intriguing poem well done in the coffins have some fun lol