Thursday, January 18, 2018

In Search Of Humanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the faint glows just before dawn
Where the coolness of the night softly
Empties into the morning dew quenching
The thirst of daffodils as they slowly
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David Wood
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Loke Kok Yee 23 January 2018

Your second stanza contrast very well with the first, This is a very well written poem and it certainly made me think deeply of the situation that you expressed so eloquently here. Thanks David

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Ruta Mohapatra 18 January 2018

Liked the first stanza. Nature has been beautifully described.

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David Wood 18 January 2018

Thank you for commenting, I rewrote to second stanza three times. I wanted the second one to be a complete contrast to the first stanza, a total opposite. I might look at it again.

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