Monday, September 1, 2014

In Search Of A War Comments

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War entered a chariot
Start its voyage in search of its prey
Search here and there with hope
But none was there in that yard
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SALINI NAIR
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 September 2014

Unless banished from the mind war can not be written off from this world ever..........very well composed

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Beautiful write Salini. I love the the you presented it. Very true said in few lines... Mind is creator of war as well as peace. War cannot be stopped until and unless human mind doesn't think of it. I loved it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 September 2014

Well penned, a lovely poem sarcasm

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