In Search Of A Goddess Comments
Every dawn is dear to me.
It's then that I see her blushes
reflected in the eastern sky.
While I wander here in her search
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A Beauty of creation, composed by your golden heart for the 100th Poem Celebration, on Poem Hunter, dear Parameswaran Sir. I have enormously enjoyed your poetic words, your 100th poem full of brilliance is in the meantime a Masterpiece! Congratulations, dear Poet.
Tell me breeze, tell me bees...I love the delicate expression. This is a fabulous poem dear poet. It gives me immense pleasure to revisit this wonderful poem.
This is such a beautiful poem full of tranquility. Scrolling I see my comment left before still want to write again how much I enjoyed reading this poem every time I click on it.
Tell me breeze, tell me bees have you met her on your way? I am jealous of this profound inquisition to mild breeze! I sincerely admire this enormous beauty in this great poetic expression!
Thank you very much Dr. Dillip. Since the characters involved are mild and gentle their dialogue is also supposed to be gentle.Hope I am correct?
A marvelous poem! Lovely poetic expressions with superb imagery. A poetic gem to be treasured.
A tender melodic poem of searching and awe between the eastern and western sky. But where exactly does that beauty hide!
Indeed a good observation sings such a good poem...inspiring...5*****
She hides in pure hearts. When she peeps out at dusk The western sky reflects her Bindi....pious expression.....A sublime piece of work. Wish you and your beloved family a happy, healthy and prosperous new year 2021.
The search for a godess In our mind Is beautifully brought out
Thank you Savitaji. I do pray for your safety especially when the whole city of NY is under the treat of the pandemic. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU
Thank you Savitaji. I can think of your stress and strain to keep away from the virus. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU
p.s. congratulations on having some fine PH members leave comments. to MyPoemList and i may share with others. :) bri
2 - favorite lines so far: " Tell me breeze, tell me bees have you met her on your way? " " beautiful lass" glad you did not forget the " l" bindi " An ornamental dot traditionally worn by Hindu women" last line i think i'd at least delete " out" ? hiding places? things she hides? bri :) I'd like to find her also
1 - I receive your " bow" , undeserved or not. " in her search" i think: " in my search (for her) " or " in search of her" tiff: " n. A fit of irritation. n. A petty quarrel. intransitive verb To quarrel"
True love resides in a pure heart..True love is unselfish.A lover keeps his love at the pedestal of a God /Goddess.True love beyond and above the body.It is expansive .A lover can feel the presence of his love in Nature. An excellent poem that deserves to be a milestone poem.Hearty congratulations for your 100th poem on Poem Hunter.
Thank you very much dear Bharti Nayak. I am happy to have my 100th poem duly commented by you. True love is, of course, beyond, passion or any other motive of the kind. It is rare, may be hiding in pure hearts for fears of exploitation
Reflections of the eastern sky! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you Edward a lot. Anything pure can be visible to those who seek it
She's beauty embodied She's the lamp of truth She's the Goddess I seek. a great philosophy of the Goddess of beauty and purity and love in the skies and in your heart. lovely poem dear Parameswaran Nair. tony god bles s u always.
Thank you very much dear Tony. Such words as yours come out only from a heart imaculate and sincere
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7/18/2025 9:47:09 PM # 1.0.0
I have read this magnificent poem before. The following lines of your poem impresses me a lot: 'Tell me breeze, tell me bees have you met her on your way? '