...In River Of Time Comments

A poem with strong strong message, it swells up emotions

very nice work. It reminds me of the old albert and costello 'Who's on Second'

a wonderful poem on life, well expressed

Excellant. Very simple and expressive. I like this poem. Keep on writing.

The river is not flowing my dear.............river has to flow..........

very expressive in simple-humble way! very beautiful! like Schubert Symphony on words!

philosophy flows with the river here, time teaches us all, thanks for the read regards uavaniceday

i understand where your coming from but it doesnt flow enough for me.Theres too many dead ends, i think its just the diction and im sure if i knew or had met you i would appreciate this more, not to say its still a lovely piece, well done.

Eyan this is beautiful wriitten. This is in my favourites. You got a heart of gold with this one great stuff! 10++

This is surely one of your best. I am in awe of your structured yet creatively written words. The last Stanza did it for me! 10 Karin Anderson

wow......this is such a beautiful write.......................excellent 10 for you! !

Eyan...awesome a truely remarkable dedication liked it....superb post...thanx cheers...a tenner

A reflection of reality. very well penned.10+++

Things definitely goes with the river of time.....well penned...10

a great write! ....indeed everything is and will be determined in time esp in the river of time

Great write....ultimately we will all disappear in the river of time.....10+ =

IN THE RIVER OF TIME I MEET THIS DEEP PROFOUND THINKER VALUE LIFE NEVER WASTE TIME IN THE RIVER OF TIME COMES GRACE NEVER RUN DRY

fine symbolic poem written such a meaningful one......so beautiful piece....Thanks!

very good poem but then I am so afraid to fall in that river of time

thanks eyan for this poem, , am so glad u made a poem like this..am so thankful for you..please accept all my thanks in making this poem dedicated to me..i love this piece of yours..thanks a lot..lavs ya dear eyan, , , naizz