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It’s my sister’s birthday today,
She left us three decades away.
We watched her lying on her hospital bed,
And slowly right before our eyes she was dead.
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what is the residue of life? just remembrance....our sisters, both are never-ageing within our soul................
Dear Mamta, Thanks for asking for my comments on such a beautiful lyrical poem, a tribute to sisterhood.The poem is a perfect one with an universal appeal as all of us have some memories of our beloved berieved souls.These two lines I would like to quote: 'filial love and bond is one of a kind that sort of comraderie is rare to find'-----It is so true in our life. Another couplet attracts attention-- 'no body can take her place I still remember her beautiful face the secrets we shared at midnight and our light banter and pillow fight' --I appreciate and empathise with your feelings which is as bright in your memory as it used to be thirty years ago..A-10-from me -RAJKUMAR
Memories remain ever green, time though wounds heal, there are often moments in our life, when reflections in solitude strikes an old painful chord; -poetic lines help to resolve! -Raj Nandy
compact composition with intense love/pain..................10 I always read this poet's poem with much zeal.
ur very intese in dnt have a sister but still i could feel it lovely
beautiful...the words carried me to a world of charmed sisterly love...very very beautiful..a worthy ode.
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7/21/2025 10:43:02 AM # 1.0.0
wonderful poem, very touching...